{"id":4529,"date":"2019-06-24T18:49:22","date_gmt":"2019-06-24T18:49:22","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/?p=4529"},"modified":"2022-07-11T09:30:52","modified_gmt":"2022-07-11T13:30:52","slug":"write-a-killer-scholarship-personal-statement-w-example","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/apply-for-scholarships\/write-a-killer-scholarship-personal-statement-w-example\/","title":{"rendered":"7 Steps (And Examples) For Writing a Killer Personal Statement"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Personal statements (also known as college essays) are a major part of both college applications and scholarship applications.<br \/>\nUnfortunately for some, writing a personal statement isn\u2019t as easy as it sounds. How are you supposed to write a great essay that sets you apart from the competition? How are you supposed to talk positively about yourself without bragging and coming across as arrogant? All of this in only a couple hundred words?<br \/>\nThese are tough questions, but rest assured, we\u2019ve got answers. This guide will walk you through a 7 step process that will help you write your personal statement, and increase your chances of getting into college and winning scholarships. In addition, at the bottom of this post, we have 7 (!) example templates that you can use to give you inspiration for your own personal statements.<br \/>\nBuckle up, here we go!<\/p>\n<h2><b>Personal Statement vs College or Scholarship Essay\u00a0<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>There is a lot of confusion about the differences between personal statements and scholarship essays. Before we begin, it\u2019s important to clarify what a few of these commonly-used terms actually mean.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Personal statement- an essay you must write for your college applications or scholarship applications to prove that you deserve to be accepted.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Scholarship essay- this term is used interchangeably with \u2018personal statement.\u2019 They are basically the same thing.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Essay prompt- the essay question or topic that you must write your essay on. This will be provided for you in the application.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Supplemental essay- an additional essay that you may need to write for an application. This is not always needed and the topic may vary between schools or programs.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Now that we\u2019ve explained the terms, let\u2019s dig in and go through how to write a personal statement in 7 easy steps.<\/p>\n<h2><b>Step 1 &#8211; Understand the Different Question Types<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>Thankfully, colleges and scholarship providers give you some direction on what to write about. Each application contains an essay prompt that you are asked to respond to. While these prompts are open-ended and can be answered in many different ways, they usually fall into one of a few categories.<br \/>\nBeing able to identify the category an essay prompt belongs to is the first step in formulating an outstanding response.<br \/>\nLet\u2019s go through the category types.<\/p>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-armin-rimoldi-5553930.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nPrompt Category 1: Overcoming a Problem<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>\u201cYou don\u2019t lose if you get knocked down; you lose if you stay down\u201d. Muhammed Ali.<br \/>\n\u201cThe only real mistake is the one from which we learn nothing\u201d. Henry Ford.<br \/>\n\u201cI get knocked down, but I get up again, no you&#8217;re never gonna keep me down\u201d. Chumbawamba.<br \/>\nYou get the idea \ud83d\ude42<br \/>\nWe all encounter hardship at some point in our lives. This type of essay prompt asks you to identify a problem or failure you faced and to describe how you overcame the problem, and what lessons you were able to learn.<br \/>\nIt\u2019s worth noting that two essay prompts from The Common App this past year were from this category:<br \/>\nHave a look and see:<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"text-align: center;\">Common App Question 2<\/h4>\n<p>The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"text-align: center;\">Common App Question 4<\/h4>\n<p>Describe a problem you&#8217;ve solved or a problem you&#8217;d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma\u2014anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution.<\/p>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 2\u00a0 &#8211; A Personal History of You<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>These kinds of questions ask you to pinpoint an important person or event in your life that helped shape you into the person you are today. For these kinds of questions, you should write about a specific formative experience, key event, or key person from your life. It\u2019s better to focus on a specific event or person than to tell your life story.<br \/>\nThis past year there were 2 questions of this kind in The Common App:<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"text-align: center;\">Common App Question 1<\/h4>\n<p>Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"text-align: center;\">Common App Question 5<\/h4>\n<p>Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.<\/p>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-gabby-k-5331206.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nPrompt Category 3 &#8211; Openness to New Ideas<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>Are you open to new ideas? How do you express these ideas, especially when relating to people with different beliefs than your own?<br \/>\nThis type of prompt aims to see how you engage with new and differing perspectives.<br \/>\nOne of the questions from The Common App this past year is a great example of this category.<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"text-align: center;\">Common App Question 3<\/h4>\n<p>Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?<\/p>\n<h3>\u00a0<b>Prompt Category 4\u00a0 &#8211; Your Future Goals<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>What do you want to do when you grow up? Do you want to become an astronaut? A doctor? A content writer?<br \/>\nThese types of prompts are designed to help the committee understand what you\u2019re interested in and how you plan to apply what you learn in college towards a future career.\u00a0 While there were no questions like this on The Common App this year, you might still see this kind of essay prompt if you are applying to a specialized program. Here is an example from the University of Southern California<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"text-align: center;\">Example \u201cYour Future Goals\u201d prompt:<\/h4>\n<p>Describe one example of how you might use design as a future architect. The admission committee will review this statement as a measure of your awareness, determination, and vision.<\/p>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 5\u00a0 &#8211; Why Do you Want to Go to This School?\u00a0<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>These prompts are pretty much what the title suggests. In this type of personal statement, you should let the committee know why you are interested in that particular school.<\/p>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 6 &#8211; Creative Prompts\u00a0<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>Some schools value creativity, out-of-the-box thinking, and eloquent writing. As a result, you might get an essay prompt that asks you to write unique, and creative personal statements. For example, you might be asked how their school will prepare you for a job that won\u2019t exist by the time you graduate.<br \/>\nThe University of Chicago, notorious for its strange prompts, has asked \u201cWhat can actually be divided by zero?\u201d. The key to these prompts is to show off clever, creative, out-of-the-box thinking that relates to what and where you want to study.<\/p>\n<h2><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-zen-chung-5745206.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nStep 2- Brainstorm and Plan<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>DON\u2019T. OVERLOOK. THIS. STEP. Many students think they\u2019ll finish faster if they skip the planning and just start writing. The truth is that good brainstorming will actually save you time. When you brainstorm effectively you will<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Be able to eliminate prompts that don\u2019t work for you<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Be able to identify prompts that might work for you<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Come up with things you could write about for each prompt<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Be in the best position to start writing a great essay. This is much better than starting to write an essay only to realize that it\u2019s not going to work and you need to start over.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>After reading the essay prompt options, and figuring out which category it belongs to, take some time to write down some thoughts and ideas that you could write about.<br \/>\nHere are some leading questions you can ask yourself that can help you think about what you can write for your personal statement.<\/p>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 1: \u201cOvercoming a problem\u201d Brainstorming:<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>Think of some problems you have encountered in your life. Once you have a problem (or two), think about how you overcame it. If you aren\u2019t happy with how you overcame it then you can focus on what you learned from the experience. Here are some ideas that might help you identify problems you\u2019ve experienced that might be good to write about.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Loss of a family member or close friend<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">An injury or health problem (physical or mental)<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A difficult relationship with a family member, friend, or romantic partner<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Moving to a new city or state, or changing schools<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Revealing a sexual or gender identity to friends or family<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Issues with acceptance, bullying, addiction, body image, or anything similar<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-gabby-k-5331200.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nPrompt Category 2: \u201cA Personal History of You\u201d Brainstorming:<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>This category of essay prompts probably requires the biggest amount of brainstorming. These questions want to know about your background, identity, interests, accomplishments, and more. Here are some ideas you can brainstorm that might help you figure out what to write for this type of personal statement:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">When you first became aware of an important identity (for good or bad)<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Your first job<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Volunteer experience<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A class that motivated or inspired you in some way.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A new hobby<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A memorable victory or failure<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A leadership position you took on<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A family member, friend, teacher, or celebrity who has impacted you.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A personal goal you achieved<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A quality in yourself you are proud of<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A unique talent you have<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 3: \u201cOpenness to New Ideas\u201d Brainstorming:<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>The world is more polarized than ever before. For this reason, universities want to know how you handle differences. For these kinds of questions, it can be helpful to think about:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Are you \/ Do you know\/have you spoken to anyone very different from you in some way? Examples of ways you could be different include:\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Religion or Ethnicity<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Skin color<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Nationality<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Social class<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Country, state, or city of origin<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Sexual or gender identification<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Political beliefs<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Do you have thoughts or beliefs about something that is not mainstream?\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">If so have you ever spoken about them to anyone? How did it turn out?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 4: \u201cYour Future Goals\u201d Brainstorming:<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>Future goals tend to be based on what you\u2019d like to study but can also include long-term career goals. It\u2019s important to show determination, vision, and ambition in these kinds of personal statements. For these kinds of questions it can be helpful to think about:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">What you\u2019d like to do professionally when you grow up<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Why you\u2019d like to do it<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">What kinds of things do you need to learn in order to get where you want to go?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">How will the things you need to learn help you?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">How can the school (or scholarship) help you learn what you need to learn so you can achieve your goal?\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Does the school have a reputable program?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Does it have a well-known faculty?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Does it have state-of-the-art facilities?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"2\">Does it have a great network of graduates who could be mentors?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-kamaji-ogino-5093648.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nPrompt Category 5: \u201cWhy this School\u201d Brainstorming:<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>This kind of prompt requires much of the same brainstorming as the previous one.\u00a0 Ideas to brainstorm should be centered around why you want to attend this particular school. For example:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Is there a program that makes the school special?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Is the school known for a talented faculty or professors you want to learn from?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Is the school affordable?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Is student life alive and vibrant?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Does the school offer excellent career services, programs, and facilities?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Do you want to become involved with a certain sport or activity the school is known for?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Are you interested in living in the city or town the college is located in?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 6: \u201cCreative Prompts\u201d\u00a0 Brainstorming (h3)<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>Since these are so unique, it\u2019s hard to say what should be brainstormed. Consider each question on its own. Try to brainstorm a few creative, out-of-the-box ideas. See which ideas you feel most passionate about and take the writing in that direction.<\/p>\n<h2><b>Step 3: Choose the Best Topic<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>Maybe, for a \u201chistory of you\u201d essay prompt, you\u2019re debating between writing about a few things. Maybe you can\u2019t decide between talking about volunteer experience, a friend who impacted you, or how your identity affected who you became.<br \/>\nNow is the time to narrow it down and choose one topic you want to write about.<br \/>\nYour topic should be one that you can write an interesting story about, one that highlights your personality, and one that shows a side of yourself that can\u2019t be found in your transcripts or resume.<br \/>\nIf you aren\u2019t sure which to choose, you can try this tactic of <a href=\"https:\/\/explore.findtherightcollege.com\/digital-assets\/FTRC-Essay-Writing-Guide.pdf\">freewriting<\/a> to see what comes easiest to you. The freewriting strategy recommends writing about a topic in an open way to see which topic is the easiest to write about, and which topics let you talk about the best ideas.<br \/>\nIf you start coming up with a lot of ideas and things to write about for one of your topics, go with it! If not, move on to your next topic and try freewriting again.<\/p>\n<h2><b>Step 4: Create An Outline\u00a0<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>Now that you have your topic, it\u2019s time to create an outline on how to do it!<br \/>\nLike brainstorming, you should not skip this step! Creating an outline is like mapping out your essay. It makes the writing much much easier, and in the long run, will save you lots and lots of time.<br \/>\nWhen you have a good plan, you don\u2019t end up rewriting the first sentence of your essay 100 times.<br \/>\nThere are two common ways to structure your personal statement &#8211; the journey structure and the passion structure. If you are writing about a time of personal growth, you should probably consider the journey structure. The journey structure focuses on the before, during, and after of your personal growth.<br \/>\nIf you plan to write about something you love doing, we recommend using the passion structure.\u00a0 The passion structure consists of multiple experiences all related to a single theme (e.g., your passion). This structure works well when you have a number of different experiences across your life that all played a significant role in shaping who you are today.<br \/>\nWe have a whole separate post that talks about both <a href=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/college-life\/the-6-steps-to-writing-the-perfect-personal-statement\/\">journey and passion structures for personal statements<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h2><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-roberto-hund-5356223.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nStep 5: Writing Your Personal Statement\u00a0<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>Now that you have your outline, you are ready to finally start writing your personal statement!<br \/>\nIf you\u2019ve done everything until now, including writing a good outline, this should be quick and easy.<br \/>\nKeep in mind that no matter how many words you are asked to write, your personal statement should have an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. We\u2019ll quickly go over how to write each one<\/p>\n<h3>Step 5a &#8211; Introduction Paragraph<\/h3>\n<p>The introduction is crucial. It is your chance to grab the committee\u2019s attention and convince them to keep reading.\u00a0 Your introduction should contain three things:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">An attention-grabbing first sentence (a hook)<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A short explanation for what you will talk about in your essay<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">The thesis statement in which you address the essay prompt.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Your introduction should be short, sweet, and to the point.<br \/>\nSome ideas you can use for a hook are:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A rhetorical question<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A memorable quote<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A quick story<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A surprising fact<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A strong surprising statement<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>If you need more detailed guidance, this post talks about <a href=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/apply-for-scholarships\/scholarship-essay-introduction\/\">how to write a scholarship essay introduction\u00a0<\/a><\/p>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-charlotte-may-5965687.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\n5b) How to Write Body Paragraphs<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>This depends on so many things. It depends on if you decide to use a journey structure, a passion structure or something else entirely. For that reason we\u2019ll simply give you some tips to keep in mind while writing the body of your essay:<\/p>\n<h4><b>Personality<\/b><\/h4>\n<p>What makes you unique? What makes you, well&#8230;you? SAT scores and grades aren\u2019t relevant here. What can you tell the committee about your character? What are some of your achievements? What are some of your goals for the future? The personal statement is the place to give readers an insight into who you are as a person aside from your test scores. Use this space to charm and impress.<\/p>\n<h4><b>Authenticity<\/b><\/h4>\n<p>It will help you charm and impress if you are honest and genuine. Write about what you hold near and dear to your heart, and not what you think readers are expecting to hear from you. Also, speak in your own voice that shows who you are! Don\u2019t look for big synonyms because it makes you sound smarter. Be yourself. Everyone else is taken.<\/p>\n<h4><b>Concrete Examples<\/b><\/h4>\n<p>Stories and examples are powerful devices that help people remember who they are. If you are passionate about animals, writing about your volunteer experience in an animal shelter is much more powerful than writing about how you love animals. Committees have to read through hundreds of scholarship applications. Examples and anecdotes will help your essay stand out. Better to prove it than to say it.<\/p>\n<h4><b>Know your Reader<\/b><\/h4>\n<p>If you are writing a personal statement for a scholarship, your goals should also align with the mission of the scholarship committee. The same can be said of a unique school or program. To understand the mission, you\u2019ll have to get to know the organization. You can do this by browsing their website.<\/p>\n<h4><b>Length<\/b><\/h4>\n<p>Stay within the required word limit. If the maximum word limit is 500, don\u2019t write 800 words. This is a sure-fire way to get you disqualified or to have the committee stop reading after about 500.<\/p>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-fauxels-3182747.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\n5c) How to End your Personal Statement<\/b><\/h3>\n<p>Your conclusion needs to give the committee one last impression of who you are. It should leave them remembering you.<br \/>\nYour conclusion should do these three things:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Wrap up your story by summing up your main points<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Clarify your thesis in a new and fresh way<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Answer the question: Why is all this important?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Some ideas on how to answer the question: why is this important<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A big thought<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">Hope for the future<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\">A call to action<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>If you need more guidance, read this post that talks about <a href=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/apply-for-scholarships\/how-to-end-a-scholarship-essay\/\">how to end a scholarship essay<\/a><\/p>\n<h2><b>Step 6: Edit Your Statement!<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>Once you finish writing, it\u2019s super important to read the whole thing and to edit it before you turn it in. Editing your work means reading it through several times until you are confident that it sounds good and that there are no mistakes in it.<br \/>\nBefore you do this, however, it\u2019s a good idea to take at least a 12-hour break from the computer. Giving yourself a break will give your brain and your eyes some time to relax. You will be fresher and in a better state of mind to catch mistakes if you give yourself some time to breathe.<br \/>\nWhen you start editing, read your essay from top to bottom. Read it several times.\u00a0 Pay extra close attention to spelling, grammar, punctuation, capital letters, and sentence structure.<br \/>\nYour personal statement is a reflection of you and your standard of work. If you submit an essay with mistakes in it, that says far more about who you are than anything you write in your statement. Submitting work with mistakes may give the committee the impression that you are lazy or careless. You obviously don\u2019t want to do that.<br \/>\nOnce you\u2019ve read everything over everything and are confident that it\u2019s flawless, have a family member, friend, teacher, or counselor look over it to make sure you didn\u2019t miss anything. An extra pair of eyes can give a fresh perspective, and help you catch anything you may have missed.<\/p>\n<h2><b>Step 7 &#8211; Hit the Submit button!<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>Finally! It\u2019s time to submit your essay. Great job putting in all the hard work.<br \/>\nGo buy yourself a cupcake or treat yourself to something nice. You earned it.<\/p>\n<h2><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-sam-lion-6001547.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nExample Personal Statements<\/b><\/h2>\n<p>Need some extra inspiration? We\u2019ve got 7(!) sample personal statements that you can use to give you ideas and ensure you are on the right track.<br \/>\nEach of the 7 personal statements below is for a different kind of prompt, as was categorized above. Some of the prompts are taken from this year\u2019s Common App questions.<\/p>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 1 &#8211; Overcoming a Problem Sample Essay<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><strong>Common App Essay Prompt 2: The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?\u00a0<\/strong><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>When I was a sophomore in high school, my parents decided that it was a good idea for me to spend less time on the couch playing video games and more time moving my body. They encouraged me to try out for the high school swimming team. I wasn\u2019t particularly talented at the sport, but I did have a number of childhood swim lessons up my sleeve. It might also be a good time to mention that I went to a small private high school that accepted everyone onto their sports teams, so I didn\u2019t have much to lose\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>Another thing worth mentioning is that I am from Minneapolis where we spend many winter days in below zero weather. Jumping into a not-heated-enough indoor pool at 6 am, 3 days a week isn\u2019t exactly enticing. But, for one reason or another and against all odds, I didn\u2019t put up much of a fight. I guess I knew deep down inside that it would be good for me to start doing something else with my life besides sitting behind a computer screen all day long.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>As expected, I was accepted onto the swimming team but at a big cost- I was by far the weakest link. I seemed to overlook this minor detail and didn\u2019t foresee the toll that it would take on me and on others. I quickly realized that I couldn\u2019t just dance around the pool swimming like a drowning dog. I had a team that was counting on me, and in some weird way, I was counting on myself. Despite being majorly out of my comfort zone, I started to go to the gym a few times a week after school to increase my strength. I worked hard during swim practice and even put in some hours on the weekend. I had never pushed myself like that before, and I was really proud to see what I was capable of.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I may not have gone home with any medals, but by the end of the year, I had increased my speed and had mastered the butterfly stroke. It\u2019s the little things in life, right? My parents also seemed pleased by the fact that I was no longer glued to the couch every day after school. I weirdly found joy in the sport, which was the last thing that I expected to find. I am much more open to trying new things now and have a lot more confidence in myself.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-cottonbro-5076527.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nPrompt category 2 &#8211;<\/b> <b>A Personal History of You Sample Essay<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Common app question 1: \u201cSome students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.\u201d<\/b><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>It was April of my freshman year of college and all my friends were heading to Cancun, Mexico for the quintessential college Spring break trip. I, on the other hand, was heading to Haiti, to volunteer with Habitat for Humanity for 7 days to rebuild homes that had been destroyed in the hurricane. For some reason that my friends found to be odd, the thought of my pasty white skin frying on the hot Mexican sand alongside hundreds of other college students didn\u2019t quite appeal to me.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I have always been a woman of my own, and have never been one to follow in the footsteps of others. Sometimes that has gotten me into trouble, but more often than not it has made me a strong and independent young woman who isn\u2019t afraid to stand out and be different.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I boarded the plane with my 12 other volunteer mates, with no expectations. I had never volunteered abroad, nor had I ever traveled alone without my family members. Not to mention, I was the only college freshman on the trip. I was looking forward to the wisdom that my elder companions were to impart on me.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>Needless to say, the volunteer trip completely changed my outlook on life. While my friends returned with stories of drinking and partying (I\u2019d hardly call that a story), I returned with the deep connections I\u2019d formed with my volunteer mates and a passion for helping communities overcome natural disasters. After coming back from that trip, I decided to double major in emergency management and psychology. It is my dream to one day hold a position in the Red Cross. For now, I will study and absorb as much information as I can, and continue to volunteer around my local community. And, if the opportunity arises for me to take my knowledge and skills abroad, I will gladly do so again<\/em><i>.\u00a0<\/i><\/span><\/p>\n<h3><b>Prompt category 3 &#8211;<\/b> <b>Openness to New Ideas Sample Essay<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Common App Question 3 &#8211; Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?\u00a0<\/b><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>My mom always told me that happiness is right under your nose. Growing up, despite my privileges, I always dreamed of being elsewhere. My house wasn\u2019t big enough, my clothes weren\u2019t nice enough and my town was boring. I would sift through National Geographic magazines at the library, dreaming of laying on a tropical beach in Bora Bora or walking the cobbled streets of Lisbon. I was always searching for whatever else was out there. I promised myself that as soon as I finished high school, I would skip this boring excuse of a town and get out of here to see the world and find my true calling.<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>Once I started college, I used my newfound freedom to my advantage. The long breaks during school allotted me plenty of time to start seeing the world. I worked hard during the semester, in both my studies and my nannying job, and was able to fund my travels around the world. I saw the Eiffel Tower, walked on the Beijing wall, and was bewildered by the northern lights in Norway. During my junior year of college, I spent six months studying abroad in Barcelona. I binged on paella and Spanish omelets during the week, and on pasta in Italy and schnitzel in Germany over the weekends.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>After the semester was over, I extended my visit and did a homestay with a local family in northern Spain. I became part of their family that summer, doing chores around the house and running to buy bread from the local bakery.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>Despite loving the experience, after a while,\u00a0 I found myself missing the sub-par greek salads from the local diner in my hometown and the familiar faces I\u2019d see when I went for Sunday morning bagels. I knew then and there that I was ready to come home.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I returned home with a newfound realization of how massive the world is and how much of it I want to see. But, I also returned finally to understanding what my mom meant when she told me all these years that happiness is right under my nose. True happiness is found when you\u2019re around people who love and care about you. I will definitely keep traveling the world, but I won\u2019t be taking my home for granted any time soon.<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-ketut-subiyanto-4126805.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nPrompt Category 4 &#8211; <\/b><b>\u201cYour Future Goals\u201d Sample Essay<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Describe how you might use what you learn in university in a future career. The admission committee will review this statement as a measure of your awareness, determination, and vision.<\/b><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>My name is Billy Meijers and I am a senior at York Secondary School. I plan to pursue my Bachelor\u2019s degree in early childhood education. After I finish my bachelor\u2019s degree, my plan and hope is to work as an elementary school teacher in Provo.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I have always known that I wanted to work as a teacher, thanks to my passion for working with children and teaching others. Throughout high school, I volunteered at a local homeless shelter with children and also worked as a day camp counselor during my summer vacations.<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>While teaching and working with children has always come naturally to me (which of course is a strong asset to have as a teacher) these qualities are not enough to make you a successful teacher. A teacher needs to know how to manage their classroom, develop curriculum, and work with a diverse group of students who come with their own unique needs. My desire to develop these skills is what is leading me to study early childhood education in college.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I am happy to say that I have already learned so much in high school. I am fascinated by the childhood development and psychology courses I have taken thus far. It\u2019s so important to understand the psychology of young children to be able to respond to their needs and teach them. Learning about cognitive and behavioral psychology will help me within the classroom setting and I&#8217;ll be able to mold my curriculum using these skills.<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\">\u00a0<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I can\u2019t wait to continue my studies and acquire more skills. I still have so much to learn about planning curriculum and managing classrooms. Next year I plan to start an internship at a local elementary school as a teacher\u2019s assistant. With any luck, the next 4 years will prepare me to be an amazing teacher where I will be able to make a real difference in the world!\u00a0<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<h3><b>Prompt Category 5 &#8211; <\/b><b>\u201cWhy This School\u201d Sample Essay\u00a0<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>There are thousands of universities and colleges. Why are you interested in attending Michigan?<\/b><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I always thought that I would follow in my family\u2019s footsteps and go to George Washington University. When I say family, I am referring to my entire family- grandparents, parents, older siblings, cousins, you name it. I was the typical three-year-old child decked out in GW attire from head to toe, and you better believe that there is plenty of photo evidence to prove it.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I never really gave my future much thought, because it seemed set in stone that I would pursue my bachelor\u2019s degree at GW University. My parents were so excited and never shied away from talking about it. However, everything changed for me when I visited the University of Michigan during my junior year of high school with my theater company.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I met several students in the theater department and connected with them right away. They told me all about the program and it instantly felt like a great fit. I had the privilege of seeing several plays during the weekend and my eyes glowed with both admiration and envy. As I looked up at that stage I knew wholeheartedly that that was where I wanted to be.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>Upon returning home, I was surprised to find my mind wandering, dreaming of starring in plays at the University of Michigan. How would my family react if I didn\u2019t carry on the GW legacy? I was so scared to share the news with my family and felt a gut-wrenching feeling for betraying our family tradition. But I couldn\u2019t lie to myself- it was so obvious where my heart was.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I shared it with my family and they took the news better than I thought. They were sad that I don\u2019t want to go to GW, but they want me to follow my dreams.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>I would be honored to study theater at the University of Michigan. I have so much to learn from the excellent instructors and fellow students, and a lot to share with others.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<h3><b><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/scholarshipowl.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/06\/pexels-samson-katt-5256140.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" \/><br \/>\nPrompt Category 6 &#8211; <\/b><b>\u201cCreative Prompt\u201d Sample Essay\u00a0<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>By the time you graduate from college, there will be jobs that don&#8217;t exist today. Describe one of them and how The University of Chicago might prepare you for it.<\/b><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>With technology growing what feels like a million miles per second, and new inventions being created on the regular, it\u2019s hard to know exactly what the future holds. The Institute for the Future predicted that 85% of jobs that students will perform in 2030 don\u2019t exist yet. So, is there even a point in going to university if you\u2019ll end up working in a job that doesn\u2019t exist yet?\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>Absolutely! University can prepare you to work in a variety of fields, and not only for one specific job. In fact, because the future is so unknown, the best thing you can do for yourself and your future is to get a college degree.<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>Let\u2019s take for example social media influencers. This is a new job that has only become mainstream over the last several years. Many social media influencers went to college and pursued degrees of all sorts. While they may not be directly using the degree they got in college, they definitely gained a lot of valuable skills from their studies, which helped contribute to their success today. College teaches many invaluable skills like critical thinking, writing, and communication. It also teaches you soft skills like teamwork, learning how to live independently, learning how to manage your schedule, and much much more.\u00a0<\/em><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #339966;\"><em>Let\u2019s imagine how university courses can prepare anyone for jobs a hypothetical job that doesn\u2019t yet exist. With the heavy presence of social media and technology in all of our lives, you can imagine that many people are rapidly becoming addicted to their devices. Introducing the \u201cdigital detox therapist-\u201d a career that is likely to exist by 2030, if not before. While there is currently no academic path to becoming a digital detox therapist, there are plenty of psychology and marketing courses that can prepare students for this career. Digital detox psychologists would need to have a background in addiction, cognitive psychology, and social psychology. They will also need to understand consumerism and marketing. 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